Re: "When the Mill Shut Down" / Will Dockery
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> Stuart Leichter wrote: > "When the Mill Shut Down" in the current form goes back to at least July 30 2006, where Stuart Leichter gave it a favorable review: > > https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/IaDWIoMXOkU/m/QcPcBOeQF-0J > > *** > > On Sunday, July 30, 2006 at 5:16:55 PM UTC-4, Stuart Leichter wrote: > >> in article [email protected], Will Dockery at >> [email protected] wrote on 7/30/06 12:59 PM: >> >> When. >> >> When the mill shut down, >> we hit the pavement with a thud, >> then we all got up and kept walking. >> Some to the work house, >> some to the poor house, >> some to the whorehouse, >> and the grave. >> >> -Will Dockery >> >> This one's good, Will. >> The title you might make When the mill shut down (without the comma, and >> then continue with the 2nd and following lines). >> I think you should post it with a C&C request in the subject line. >> Stuart >> (crit-cred: I know literal from figurative, I know opinions from sentiments, >> and I never threatened you) >> > > > *** Good old Stuart Leichter, I hope he's doing well, wherever he is. 😏 This response appears in the discussion at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=660861078#660861078 -- Via JLA Forums web gateway for alt.arts.poetry.comments: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewforum.php?f=655