Re: My first ASCII art

Eli the Bearded <*@eli.users.panix.com> writes:

> In alt.ascii-art, Daniel  <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Please peer review my first art. As a background I was seeking help in
>> repacing a chip on a computer I own. The following is my best effort
>> rendering of the schematic from the tech reference for the chip in
>> question.
>
> Short answer: you did good.
>
>>    To
>> HD44102s
>> | | | |
>> | | | |
>> | | | |
>> | | | |-----------------o----------------------} To HD44102s
>> | | |-----------------o-+----------------------} To HD44102s
>> | |-----------------o-+-+----------------------} To HD44102s
>> |-----------------o-+-+-+----------------------} To HD44102s
>>                   | | | |  o    o
>>                   | | | |  |vvv |
>>                   | | | | -++++-+-ooo- -oo-----
>>                  _|_|_|_|_|||||_|_||||_|||__
>>          :------|                           |
>>          o------|        M11 HD44103        |--} M12 HD44103
>>          :------|___________________________|
>
> Longer answer,  it could be better. Spacing things out a bit more would
> probably help. Some corners could be nice looking. Consider this tweek:
>
>      To
>   HD44102s
>
>   | | | |
>   | | | |
>   | | | |
>   | | | `-----------------o------------------------ \
>   | | `-----------------o-+------------------------  \  All To
>   | `-----------------o-+-+------------------------  /  HD44102s
>   `-----------------o-+-+-+------------------------ / 
>                     | | | |   o    o
>                     | | | |   |vvv |
>                     | | | |  -++++-+-ooo- -oo-----
>                   ._|_|_|_|__|||||_|_||||_|||_.
>            :------|                           |
>            o------|        M11 HD44103        |---- } M12 HD44103
>            :------|___________________________|
>
>                              ^
>                               \ I wonder what's going on with
> 			        this pin that doesn't connect.
>
>> For some reason some of this is multicolored and I don't know why. I
>> hope it's not ruined after the post.
>
> Not ruined.
>
> Elijah
> ------
> very sharp lines meeting at right angles is basically easiest art subject

Thanks for your suggestions.

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Daniel

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