Re: The Tree Of Life

On 2/8/23 19:08, Ilya Shambat wrote:
> The golden tree, The Tree of Life -
> Into its shadow I will dive
> And feast upon the blessed fruit
> Then dig until the very root.
[.....]
> The one in all, the all in one -
> The life-tree blooming in the sun.

The transitions are flow from the first line to the last like it was 
meant to be. The symbols are arranged just right and they flow to the 
end, all merging into the light. In my mind the tree is golden and 
merges into the golden sun at the end, which casts the shadow we saw at 
the beginning.

If you repeat the beginning of this poem after the last line, it makes 
sense. The sense is like the end going back to the beginning inside an 
eternity.

Overall your poem is an inspiring and stark herald of things to come.

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