Re: The Tree Of Life

On Thursday, February 9, 2023 at 1:02:12 PM UTC+10, NightBulb wrote:
> On 2/8/23 19:08, Ilya Shambat wrote: 
> > The golden tree, The Tree of Life - 
> > Into its shadow I will dive 
> > And feast upon the blessed fruit 
> > Then dig until the very root.
> [.....]
> > The one in all, the all in one - 
> > The life-tree blooming in the sun.
> The transitions are flow from the first line to the last like it was 
> meant to be. The symbols are arranged just right and they flow to the 
> end, all merging into the light. In my mind the tree is golden and 
> merges into the golden sun at the end, which casts the shadow we saw at 
> the beginning. 
> 
> If you repeat the beginning of this poem after the last line, it makes 
> sense. The sense is like the end going back to the beginning inside an 
> eternity. 
> 
> Overall your poem is an inspiring and stark herald of things to come. 

Thank you.

> How to get ahead in life. Judaism: circumcision. Christianism: lobotomy.

Funny.