Re: misc doc fixes for REL_12_STABLE

Michael Paquier <[email protected]> Fri, 12 Jul 2019 13:44:18 +0900

Newsgroups	gmane.comp.db.postgresql.devel.documentation
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On Thu, Jul 11, 2019 at 05:49:26PM +0300, Liudmila Mantrova wrote:
> Please consider a patch that fixes some trivial issues in new doc fragments
> (a couple of typos/ambiguities and some tags that affect translation).

Thanks for the patch.  I have one comment.

> -     backups.  Moreover, because it writes a backup_label file on the
> -     master, it can cause the master to fail to restart automatically after
> -     a crash.  On the other hand, the erroneous removal of a backup_label
> -     file from a backup or standby is a common mistake which can result
> +     backups.  Moreover, because it creates a backup label file, as
> +     described below, it can block automatic restart of the master server
> +     after a crash. On the other hand, the erroneous removal of this
> +     file from a backup or standby is a common mistake, which can result
>       in serious data corruption.  If it is necessary to use this method,
>       the following steps may be used.

Okay, yes that could be a bit confusing for the reader.  Nit: I would
replace "master" with "primary" while we are in the area.  What do you
think?

But that's the only comment I have, the rest looks good!
--
Michael

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