Re: readability changes to postgres.sgml

On 2019-08-16 02:26, Stephen Frost wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> * Joshua D. Drake ([email protected]) wrote:
>> attached

> they seem to be simply removing words and removing content that is

For what it's worth, I think the proposed changes are all solid 
improvements. The text reads better with them, and that's what this is 
about -- not whether the removed little text-pieces were 'true' or not.


However, there is one typo:

+    read independently.  There are many extrernal programming

extrernal -> external
(and I would say that dropping that word 'external' would be another 
little improvement)