Re: Website - Pending content tasks

I would recommend staying with second person "You" but being more formal
"GNOME is" rather than contractions.

Paul

On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 1:09 PM, Darton Williams <[email protected]> wrote:

> On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 7:32 AM, Lucas Rocha <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> > Download:
> > - Main page looks ok, a final review would be nice.
>
> http://website-editors.gnome.org/download
> Marking as "Draft Available", proofread.
>
> Quick note: the "How to Install GNOME" section uses contractions
> (GNOME is -> GNOME's) resulting in an informal voice, is this the
> intent?
> "You're already running a Linux or UNIX distribution, but GNOME's
> missing? Don't hesitate: GNOME's very..."
>
> > - Distributions page is a bit outdated. Someone needs to check the
> > data and update it accordingly with latest GNOME releases.
>
> http://website-editors.gnome.org/download/distributions
> Verified distros listed, added a few more shipping 2.28. Marking as
> "Draft Available".
>
> > - Installation page has a too long intro. Has a lot of TODO items in
> > the shown data. Needs volunteers.
> > - Live Images content looks mostly ok,  a final review would be nice.
> > Has a TODO item about Bittorrents.
> > - GNOME apps on Windows still needs content. Needs volunteers.
> > - GNOME apps on Mac still needs content. Needs volunteers.
> > - Latest Sources needs intro. Has a bunch of TODO items. Needs
> volunteers.
> >
>
> Best,
>
> dartonw
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