Re: Website - Pending content tasks

Claus Schwarm <[email protected]>
Newsgroups gmane.comp.gnome.marketing,gmane.comp.gnome.web
Message-ID <1266420439.5024.8.camel@desktop>
Hi, Darton!

On Mon, 2010-02-15 at 14:09 -0500, Darton Williams wrote:
> On Mon, Feb 15, 2010 at 7:32 AM, Lucas Rocha <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> > Download:
> > - Main page looks ok, a final review would be nice.
> 
> http://website-editors.gnome.org/download
> Marking as "Draft Available", proofread.
> 
> Quick note: the "How to Install GNOME" section uses contractions
> (GNOME is -> GNOME's) resulting in an informal voice, is this the
> intent?

Yes, that's the intent. The copy should appear casual and
conversational.

Thanks for your help!


Regards,
Claus
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