Re: Charity status

Andy Laurence <[email protected]> Mon, 28 Oct 2002 10:43:10 +0000 (GMT)
Newsgroups gmane.comp.isp.consume.bristol
Message-ID <Pine.LNX.4.44.0210281038570.20072-100000@grimsby>
On Mon, 28 Oct 2002, Josh Howlett wrote:
> > "To build a communications network built, run by, and for the local
> > community."
> 
> I think this needs to be fleshed out a bit - a layman probably wouldn't 
> understand what you'd use the network _for_.  For example:
> 
>   "...provision of Internet services such as email and the web"
>   etc...

OK, how about this...

"To build a communications network for the provision of services found on 
the Internet such as email and web pages.  The network is to be built, run 
by and for the community."

I probably don't need to mention that I was never any good at English ;-)

Andy


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