[Jakarta Wiki] Update of "TLPHttpComponents" by RolandWeber

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The comment on the change is:
incorporated some of Erik's suggestions

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  WHEREAS, the Board of Directors deems it to be in the best interests
  of the Foundation and consistent with the Foundation's purpose to
  establish a Project Management Committee charged with the creation and
- maintenance of a '''toolset of low level Java components focused on HTTP and
+ maintenance of open-source software related to a '''toolset of low level
+ Java components focused on HTTP and associated protocols''', and of
- related protocols''', and of '''applications based on these components''',
+ '''applications based on these components''',
  for distribution at no charge to the public.
  
  NOW, THEREFORE, BE IT RESOLVED, that a Project Management Committee (PMC),
  to be known as "Apache !HttpComponents Project", be and hereby is
  established pursuant to Bylaws of the Foundation; and be it further
  
- RESOLVED, that the Apache !HttpComponents Project be and hereby is '''charged
+ RESOLVED, that the Apache !HttpComponents Project be and hereby is responsible
- with''' the creation and maintenance of a toolset of low level Java components
+ for the creation and maintenance of a toolset of low level Java components
  focused on HTTP and related protocols; and be it further
  
  RESOLVED, that the Apache !HttpComponents Project be and hereby is '''allowed
@@ -44, +45 @@

  
  RESOLVED, that the Apache !HttpComponents Project be and hereby
  is tasked with the migration and rationalization of the
- Apache Jakarta !HttpComponents Project's components; and be it further
+ Apache Jakarta !HttpComponents subproject components; and be it further
  
  RESOLVED, that the Apache !HttpComponents Project be and hereby
  is tasked with the migration and maintenance of the codebase formerly known as
@@ -52, +53 @@

  and be it further
  
  RESOLVED, that all responsibilities pertaining to the Jakarta !HttpComponents
+ subproject components and the Jakarta Commons !HttpClient encumbered upon the
- subproject encumbered upon the Apache Jakarta Project are hereafter discharged.
+ Apache Jakarta Project are hereafter discharged.