Scarab commit: svn commit: r11135 - branches/release/1.0.22/www/message_from_the_owners.html

Author: mcoss
Date: 2012-04-13 13:29:42-0700
New Revision: 11135

Modified:
   branches/release/1.0.22/www/message_from_the_owners.html

Log:
ENH - wording

Modified: branches/release/1.0.22/www/message_from_the_owners.html
Url: http://scarab.tigris.org/source/browse/scarab/branches/release/1.0.22/www/message_from_the_owners.html?view=diff&pathrev=11135&r1=11134&r2=11135
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--- branches/release/1.0.22/www/message_from_the_owners.html	(original)
+++ branches/release/1.0.22/www/message_from_the_owners.html	2012-04-13 13:29:42-0700
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
         <p><b>
         <a href="http://scarab.tigris.org/servlets/ProjectDocumentList">Scarab 1.0.22 Release Candidate 1</a> is available.</b>
         </p>
-		<p>The Scarab team is pleased to announce the first release candidate of Scarab 1.0.22. It‘s the upcoming replacement for the current stable 1.0.21 release, and brings a host of exciting new features and many enhancements and fixes.
+		<p>The Scarab team is pleased to announce the first release candidate of Scarab 1.0.22. It‘s the upcoming replacement for the current stable 1.0.21 release, bringing a bunch of new features and <i>many</i> enhancements and fixes.
 		</p>
-		<p><b>Note:</b> This is a NOT a final release. Do not install it in production environments - even if it‘s already extensively tested and considered stable. 
+		<p><b>Note:</b> This is a NOT a final release. As such, do not install it in production environments - even if it‘s already extensively tested and considered stable. 
 		The final stable version will be released shortly.
 		</p>
 		<p>In addition to many smaller enhancements and fixes the new release offers:

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