Re: Video ad for kde - Code in
Casper Clemence <[email protected]>
| Newsgroups | gmane.comp.kde.events |
|---|---|
| Message-ID | <AANLkTinsx8-ZN_D291W7Aj6e7qb4npjqwAqtTrogkam6__26692.1508046382$1294141660$gmane$org@mail.gmail.com> |
A couple of thoughts on the following * * *We are not free because we chose,* *we choose because we are free. * *And so you can you. Be free. Choose KDE* Being commanded "Choose KDE" sounds a little incongruous next to "be free". In fact it contradicts the couplet before it "We are not free because we chose / we choose because we are free." or could easily be seen that way. I would favour the simpler: *We are not free because we chose,* *we choose because we are free.* * * *Be free. * *Be KDE* * * This also removes "And so you can you" which separates the viewer from the narrator. I think the implicit "I could be a part of that 'we'" is more powerful than the explicit "and so could you" _______________________________________________ This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. Visit https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo to unsubscribe, set digest on or temporarily stop your subscription.