Re: Booklet version 3
Algot Runeman <[email protected]>
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On 01/24/2011 08:02 AM, Felix Michel wrote:
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> Link: www.tradukt.ch/kde_booklet_ver3.pdf
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Looking great!
Re-reading always seems to highlight something new to modify.
Page 8: Below the Marble illustration, KStars should be made bold for
prog. name consistency.
Page 11: At the top should Calligra Suite be bold? After talking about
Calligra, the boxed note refers to KOffice. Should match.
Page 26: Capitalize "hey..."
Replace comma with semicolon in "Ask, we all had to learn!" -->
"Ask; we all had to learn."
Page 27: Wups! Now there isn't any period after "in person" above the photo.
Page 37: The first sentence is a repeat from the final paragraph of page
36. Just take it out and begin page 37 with "Above all" (taking out But).
--Algot
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