Re: Booklet, version 7

Hi all, just noticed something in the booklet, see if you think they should
be revised or not. :)

1. For 'Workspaces Page 18' on 'Table of Contents' page: add a punctuation
full stop '.' at end of sentence
2. Coherence of spelling *'to-do' *(pls refer to 'to-dos' in line 3 of 1st
paragraph of P.4):

   - P.3, line 3 of 1st paragraph: 'manage your* todo* list' ---> to-do
   - P.4, 3rd bullet pt of 2nd paragraph: 'address books and *todo* list are
   ...' ----> to-do

3. Line 6 of 1st paragraph on P.7:  *'practice* touch typing' --> practise
4. Caption on P.12: 'Prepare your presentations *with  Calligra* Stage'
----> too much spacing between words



On 2 February 2011 14:42, Damien Tardy-Panis <[email protected]>wrote:

> If I can make one more request - on p39 could "KDE Desktop Suite" change to
>> just "KDE" or "KDE Software"? What is the KDE Desktop Suite?
>>
>
> I just sent a mail to Eugene to see if he can quickly make that change in
> the cover.
>
>  Damien
>
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