Re: The Little Game - final version.

On Tuesday, March 22, 2011, Lukas wrote:
> Here it is.
> 
> With the great help of Justin the RC version was done. If there is no major
> objections, lets start publishing it at 0:00 GMT :)
> 
> http://bit.ly/KDE_Survey2011
> 
> If you have any minor suggestions, want direct access to form or anything
> else, just let me know.

some comments:

"Makerting stufff" => "Presenting KDE To Others"?

"...use following arguments " => "... use the following arguments"

"...like to use following arguments " => "... like to use the following 
arguments"

"... target the following user groups" => is this meant to be things like the 
exampley only, e.g. "Sysadmins" or "Programmers" or "Office workers", or are 
you looking for people to also put "non user group" type groups in there as 
well, such as "Artists", "Students", "Trend followers", etc?

"and your contacts, If you I'd like to join any KDE team" => "and an email 
address if you'd like to join the KDE team" or even just remove the stray 
"I'd" in the sentence. i do think being more specific than "contacts" is 
useful though as i don't think we need/want people's phone numbers, for 
instance ;)

looking nice.. cheers ...

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Aaron J. Seigo
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