Re: 4.9 ad for magazine
viviane nonato <[email protected]>
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"I'll meet tomaz and the other guys from KDE Brazil tomorrow and we will brainstorm about the folder. the plan is to finish everything by tomorrow." 2012/8/10 viviane nonato <[email protected]> > 2012/8/10 Carl Symons <[email protected]> > >> On Fri, Aug 10, 2012 at 3:53 AM, viviane nonato >> <[email protected]> wrote: >> > Hi, I liked his comments, below a few more questions. >> > >> > I have few remarks >> > * The KDE font is wrong, it's not the 'official' KDE font >> > >> > What is the official font? >> >> >> The official font is Kabel. There's a link at the bottom of >> http://www.kde.org/stuff/clipart.php >> >> > >> > * Should there be space between "beautifully free" >> > >> > In the previous announcement is the next version 4.8, the space between >> > letters is very small. >> >> It needs to look like two distinct words. >> >> > >> > * Not ever ever stretch the images, but rather crop - see the white >> > circles, They are squished >> > >> > he white circles are not crushed, are bitmaps that are not part of the >> > wallpaper. >> >> The bitmap is close enough to one of the standard desktop backgrounds >> that it should be accurate to that image. It looks like "Air" >> stretched. This background was the default in a previous release. It >> is a well known image and people are likely to react negatively >> (especially the exceptionally picky artist). The image is fine. You >> could just crop it to the required size. "Air" wallpaper image is >> attached. >> >> >> > >> > * The screenshot is very tiny and the such does not serve much purpose >> > >> > In the list is how to attach, then insert the image as a message. >> >> I think that a small screen shot is fine--it depicts Plasma Workspaces >> and gives readers something concrete to relate to. The background of >> the screenshot should be something more current; Blue Curl was the >> background quite a few releases back. Please let the list know if you >> need an up-to-date screenshot. >> > > I'll need up-to-date screenshot.It would be great. > >> >> > >> > * Claire, on the Other hand, is too big. I think it's very nice to >> put her >> > there, but the main Should That Be 'message' of the / advertisement /? >> > >> > I think we should keep the idea of honor, a matter that is accurate >> picture >> > of Claire with a good resolution, so I do not. >> >> I agree with Martin, the Claire dedication is too big. Also...her >> photo has a different aspect ratio than the original. As it is >> currently, readers of the magazine have no context for her picture or >> the dedication. I suggest the URL for the release announcement >> (http://www.kde.org/announcements/4.9/), a small picture in color, and >> a short phrase dedicating the release to the memory of Claire Lotion. >> >> The release is the news, a key topic of the ad. KDE is a topic of the >> ad. KDE is the lasting image the ad should leave with people. The >> dedication to Claire how the KDE Community treats its members. The >> release and KDE should be featured most prominently. >> > > I understand. > > >> >> >> > >> > * What's with the blue rectangle on top-left? >> > >> > It is a blue rectangle, some things do not need symbolism. >> > >> > * The KDE logo next to Clair's name Should be next to KDE I think >> > >> > But is the official logo. >> >> The blue piece at the top left is distracting. I understand the art of >> it. It just doesn't work for me either. >> >> The KDE logo and KDE in Kabel font are highly recognizable. They >> should be featured prominently. "beautifully free" works well. >> > > Ok. > >> >> >> > >> > * Also the font is Clair's name is not good >> > >> > What font do you suggest? >> >> Sans serif. Liberation Sans, Nimbus Sans L, Bitstream Vera Sans >> >> >> Thank you for working on this. It's tough to do art by committee. In >> this case, the ad is a statement representing the entire KDE >> Community. So there will be varying opinions and we're not shy about >> expressing them. They are not a reflection on you or your work. >> > > I like this kind of thinking, collective work strengthens the soul. =) > > Thinking an art without reference visual identity is a difficult > environment, some I found on the Internet are opposed to each other as per > the format exempo text and shapes, the only standard that follow is the > brand logo. I would like to draw something with movement or have people > passing a message of integration, I'm still thinking about it for a > picture. > > I await more suggestions. > Thank you. > > >> Carl >> >> >> > >> > That's all I can see on a quick look :) >> > >> > Thank you. >> > >> > 2012/8/10 Martin Klapetek <[email protected]> >> >> >> >> Hi >> >> >> >> On Fri, Aug 10, 2012 at 1:05 AM, viviane nonato < >> [email protected]> >> >> wrote: >> >>> >> >>> sorry have not sent before a preview of what I'm working, is that >> before >> >>> I thought of doing a drawing of Claire, I'm not satisfied with what >> he was >> >>> drawing. So today I tried to do something simple. I think we need >> more input >> >>> on the layout. >> >> >> >> >> >> I have few remarks >> >> * the KDE font is wrong, it's not the 'official' KDE font >> >> * there should be space between "beautifully free" >> >> * do not ever ever stretch images, but rather crop - see the white >> >> circles, they are squished >> >> * the screenshot is very tiny and as such does not serve much purpose >> >> * Clarie, on the other hand, is too big. I think it's very nice to put >> >> her there, but should that be the main 'message' of the >> /advertisement/? >> >> * what's with the blue rectangle on top-left? >> >> * the KDE logo next to Clair's name should be next to KDE I think >> >> * also the font for Clair's name is not good >> >> >> >> That's all I can see on a quick look :) >> >> >> >> -- >> >> Martin Klapetek | KDE Developer >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> >> This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. >> >> >> >> Visit https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo to unsubscribe, >> set >> >> digest on or temporarily stop your subscription. >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > Viviane Nonato >> > tel:(21) 86028639/79527335 >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. >> > >> > Visit https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo to unsubscribe, >> set >> > digest on or temporarily stop your subscription. >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. >> >> Visit https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo to unsubscribe, >> set digest on or temporarily stop your subscription. >> > > > > -- > Viviane Nonato > tel:(21) 86028639/79527335 > > > > * > * > > -- Viviane Nonato tel:(21) 86028639/79527335 * * _______________________________________________ This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. 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