Re: Article about Baloo
"Aaron J. Seigo" <[email protected]>
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On Friday, February 21, 2014 09:22:52 Stuart Jarvis wrote: > "developed in a European Union funded research project" > would become > "developed in a European Union funded research project (NEPOMUK)". imo not only should Nepomuk be mentioned in this fasion for the reasons Stuart mentions, but the word “external” should be dropped from the sentence. External to what? (We know, will the reader? Doubtful..) Does it matter to the story? No. Introducing an unclear distinction is a distraction, and as it is unnecessary should be removed. I’ve also cleared up some grammar issues in the text (which don’t affect meaning) -- Aaron J. Seigo _______________________________________________ This message is from the kde-promo mailing list. Visit https://mail.kde.org/mailman/listinfo/kde-promo to unsubscribe, set digest on or temporarily stop your subscription.