Re: Stall Posters

On Sunday 20 September 2015 22:30:26 you wrote:
> (please answer only to kde-promo)
> 
> Hey, due to several reasons, it took me much longer to finally come up with a 
> first draft. Sorry for that :/
> 
> Here [1] you can find a first alpha-version for a possible KDE Frameworks 5 
> poster. (This is also why the frameworks list is in CC.) 
> 
> POSTER DRAFT:
> [1] https://homepages.uni-paderborn.de/phoenixx/kdepromo/kf5_poster_v1.pdf
> 
> There are a few points to be said to this draft:
> * some of the content comes from the KF5 flyer that was done last year
> * the layout is just hand-made by me and I will reach out for the VDG in a 
> different mail to let them tell me how to do it better :) specifically, there 
> are numerous micro-optimizations that I will do once the content is fixed
> * what I am currently need is some proof reading of the content:
>   - is everything correct?
>   - is something important missing?
>   - what about grammar/spelling?

Looks good!

Some spelling mistakes jumped to my eyes:

usefull -> useful
challening -> challenging

About content:

"checkable items" is not precise enough, the Qt item views support this
already, there must be something extra about what we do there; maybe better
say "many ready-to-use proxymodels".

"and translation", yeah that's what ki18n is about, seems redundant to finish with that.
Maybe say "and scripting" instead?

KConfig doesn't mention what it does better than QSettings. 
Maybe add "with enterprise features" ?


-- 
David Faure, [email protected], http://www.davidfaure.fr
Working on KDE Frameworks 5


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