Re: [Discuss] Randa Meetings 2015 story almost ready - please proofread

Samuel Gaist <[email protected]> Sat, 21 Nov 2015 22:16:46 +0100

Newsgroups	gmane.comp.kde.events
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Hi,

Just one thing I'm not sure about: "Them team". shouldn't it be "Their team" ?

Otherwise, nice article :)

Cheers
Samuel

On 21 nov. 2015, at 15:31, Mario Fux <[email protected]> wrote:

> Am Saturday 21 November 2015, 15.17:19 schrieb Albert Astals Cid:
> 
> Morning Albert
> 
>> El Saturday 21 November 2015, a les 11:23:39, Mario Fux va escriure:
>>> Morning
>>> 
>>> The dot story for the Randa Meetings 2015 dot story is finally almost
>>> ready:
>>> https://dot.kde.org/2015/11/21/randa-meetings-2015-huge-success-again
>>> 
>>> Please proofread and help.
>> 
>> SOMEHOW INCLUDE THE PICTURE DIRECTLY -> Agree
> 
> Soon to follow. Need the ack from Gilles.
> 
>> Touch&Mobile - Bring Touch to KDE  <- this needs to be a header?
> 
> Yes. It's the sixth group more or less.
> 
>> I'd link some word of " As we pointed out during the fundraiser" to https://
>> www.kde.org/fundraisers/kdesprints2015
> 
> Done.
> 
>> And if you can find a way to sneak a sentence saying "donate more at
>> https:// www.kde.org/community/donations/index.php" somewhere that'd also
>> be cool ;)
> 
> Too.
> 
>> Typos:
>> * participatens -> participants
>> * KDE Connect - blabla
>> * seperate -> separate
>> * coordinational -> coordination ?
>> * heterogenous -> heterogeneous
>> * expertience -> experience? expertize?
>> * jens -> Jens
>> * commmand -> command
>> * busses -> buses
>> * dicussed -> discussed
> 
> Fixed all of them and some more.
> 
> Thanks
> Mario
> 
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