Re: KDE Applications 17.04 annoucement ready for comments

Paul Brown <[email protected]> Thu, 20 Apr 2017 23:29:49 +0200
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On Thursday, 20 April 2017 22:04:38 CEST Albert Astals Cid wrote:
> El dijous, 20 d’abril de 2017, a les 20:32:39 CEST, Paul Brown va escriure:
> > On Thursday, 20 April 2017 12:00:33 CEST Albert Astals Cid wrote:
> > > El dijous, 20 d’abril de 2017, a les 10:57:25 CEST, Elvis Angelaccio va
> > 
> > Hey Albert, I realise it is too late to stop the email blast, but could we
> > make one small modification to the text on the web and change
> > 
> > "we have made the KDE Applications suite less prone to glitches and much
> > friendlier to use."
> > 
> > to
> > 
> > "we have made the KDE Applications suite less prone to glitches and much
> > friendlier."
> > 
> > please?
> > 
> > Otherwise there is a redundancy in that paragraph and it reads badly.
> 
> Done.

Thanks

> 
> Cheers,
>   Albert
> 
> > > escriure:
> > > > On Thu, Apr 20, 2017 at 1:16 AM, Albert Astals Cid <[email protected]>
> 
> wrote:
> > > > > Just finished putting up Paul's version (with some minor changes of
> > > > > my
> > > > > own) on
> > > > > 
> > > > > https://www.kde.org/announcements/announce-applications-17.04.0.php?
> > > > > ik
> > > > > no
> > > > > wt
> > > > > hisisunfinished=true
> > > > > 
> > > > > You've got ~16h to comment.
> > > > > 
> > > > > My minor changes from Paul's version are:
> > > > > 
> > > > > Removed "The very newest and best collection of apps for Plasma is
> > > > > ready
> > > > > to hit your desktop." because our apps are not "for Plasma", they
> > > > > work
> > > > > in
> > > > > any desktop environment.
> > > > > 
> > > > > Removed "Enjoy your new desktop!" because what we are releasing here
> > > > > is
> > > > > just apps "nothing to do" the desktop.
> > > > > 
> > > > > Removed "Literally dozens of libraries – the backbone of the KDE
> > > > > framework
> > > > > and apps – have been improved and stabilised, making life easier for
> > > > > developers, and contributing to a nimbler experience for end users."
> > > > > because even if it's true that KDE Applications release has some
> > > > > libraries they're meant to be internal to the apps (i.e. not shared
> > > > > with
> > > > > the world like KDE Frameworks) so i don't think it's worth speaking
> > > > > much
> > > > > of libraries when releasing KDE Applications.
> > > > > 
> > > > > Changed "Dolphin: Plasma's favorite file explorer" to "Dolphin: Our
> > > > > favorite file explorer" because Dolphin works just fine outside
> > > > > Plasma.
> > > > > 
> > > > > Changed some british to american spellings.
> > > > > 
> > > > > Added the three paragraphs above the "KAlgebra" section.
> > > > > 
> > > > > Of course i can be convinced those sentences need to make it back :)
> > > > 
> > > > Hi,
> > > > overall looks good! The ark screenshot is not very useful though, it
> > > > doesn't show the new feature in action. I'd suggest to replace it with
> > > > the one I'm attaching (or something similar), if possible.
> > > 
> > > Done.
> > > 
> > > > Also, it's now possible to install Dolphin services from
> > > > store.kde.org. I forgot to put this feature in the notes.kde.org file,
> > > > so feel free to ignore it if it's too late.
> > > 
> > > Yeah, let's not do big changes anymore.
> > > 
> > > Cheers,
> > > 
> > >   Albert
> > >   
> > > > > Cheers,
> > > > > 
> > > > >   Albert
> > > > 
> > > > Cheers,
> > > > Elvis


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