Re: website

On Mon, Nov 2, 2009 at 10:32 PM, Aaron Reichman <[email protected]> wrote:
> Text for review:
> -------------------------------------------------------
> KDE-women is a group of women in the KDE community. We are here to
> help increase the number of women in Open Source and to support each
> other. KDE is an friendly and open community and one of the Open
> Source projects with the highest rate of female contributors. It
> strives through its diversity.
>
> A couple of grammatical things I noticed in the previous paragraph: I
> think that "KDE is a friendly and open community..." is more correct
> than "KDE is an friendly and open community..." Also, "It strives for
> diversity" might make more sense than striving through diversity. Hope
> that helps.

In my opinion, Aaron's edits make the above text better.

> Some of the things we do:
> - helping find women find the right place for them to contribute

This should read: help women find the right place to contribute

> - encourage women to give talks at conferences like Akademy, the
> annual KDE conference

....such as Akademy.....

> - provide support in difficult situations

How about "provide mutual support"

> and most importantly we make KDE rock more each day ;-)

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