ARK-paper-draft readers?

Folks, as you know, I'm trying to get together an ARK paper
for LISA.  Anyone want to volunteer to read and comment?

I would ask for pretty quick turnaround (a day or two), but
the flip side is that I am *not* asking for you to decide
the "goodness" of the paper.  I mostly want sanity-checking;
thus, comments of the form (a) "Sentence <blah> is
incoherent" or (b) "I don't have the slightest idea what
you're talking about in section 3".  It's just: (1) read
through, with red pen in hand; (2) type in whatever you
marked.  Judgment not required; done in under an hour...

Besides my eternal gratitude, you might also get a better
idea of what this ARK madness is about :-)

If there are enough volunteers, I plan to use a couple at a
time (i.e. per revision), and I won't ask anyone twice
(without special reason).  It will probably be a few days
before I ask the first people.  Thanks in advance!

Will