svn commit: r1922183 - /subversion/site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html

Author: hartmannathan
Date: Wed Nov 27 21:47:52 2024
New Revision: 1922183

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1922183&view=rev
Log:
In site/staging: Minor fixes in 1.15 draft release notes

* site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html:
  (#news): Populate missing links to new feature highlights.
  (#pristines-on-demand): When showing both possible '--store-pristine'
   command lines ('=no' vs '=yes'), clarify the second one by emphasizing
   the 'yes' in the text.
  (#pristines-on-demand::table): Make terminology in table match that of
   Legend: s/No/Never/.
  (#streamy-checkouts): Grammar fix.

Modified:
    subversion/site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html

Modified: subversion/site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html?rev=1922183&r1=1922182&r2=1922183&view=diff
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--- subversion/site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html (original)
+++ subversion/site/staging/docs/release-notes/1.15.html Wed Nov 27 21:47:52 2024
@@ -39,6 +39,10 @@
   <li><a href="#"
       >###</a></li>
   -->
+  <li><a href="#pristines-on-demand"
+      >Pristines On Demand</a></li>
+  <li><a href="#streamy-checkouts"
+      >Streamy Checkouts</a></li>
   <li><a href="#enhancements"
       >Many enhancements and bug fixes</a></li>
   <li><a href="#issues"
@@ -238,7 +242,7 @@ $ svn checkout --store-pristine=no $REPO
 </pre>
 
 <p>The command to check out a normal working copy is unchanged, but users may
-explicitly write:</p>
+explicitly write <tt>yes</tt>:</p>
 
 <pre>
 $ svn checkout --store-pristine=yes $REPO $WC
@@ -270,7 +274,7 @@ how that command accesses the repository
 
   <tr>
     <td>cat (BASE)</td>
-    <td>No</td>
+    <td>Never</td>
     <td>Hydrate</td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
@@ -285,12 +289,12 @@ how that command accesses the repository
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td>diff (BASE)</td>
-    <td>No</td>
+    <td>Never</td>
     <td>Hydrate</td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
     <td>revert</td>
-    <td>No</td>
+    <td>Never</td>
     <td>Hydrate</td>
   </tr>
   <tr>
@@ -381,7 +385,7 @@ to annoying errors on the client side.</
 <p>For example, assuming a 60 second HTTP timeout (the default in httpd 2.4.x)
 and reasonably fast storage on the client side, timeouts could be expected to
 occur while installing any directory about 6 GB in size or larger. (This value
-varied significantly based on numerous interrelated factors.)</p>
+could vary significantly based on numerous interrelated factors.)</p>
 
 <p>This issue is addressed by making the checkout stream data to both the
 administrative directory and the projected working file simultaneously,