[SMIL30 LC comment] 16. SMIL 3.0 Transition Effects

Hello SMIL working group,

some comments on examples in chapter 16


16.6.3

example 5:

'<img src="img1.jpg" dur="2s" transOut="awipe" .>'
->
'<img src="img1.jpg" dur="2s" transOut="awipe" ... />'?


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16.7.1

example:

'<foo xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink">
    ...
    <transitionFilter xlink:href="#foo" .../>
    ...
</foo>'

-> shouldn't it reference an id attribute or an xml:id attribute?
     or is the name of the element the same by chance?
-> maybe better this?

'<img xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" id="foo" ...>
    ...
    <transitionFilter xlink:href="#foo" .../>
    ...
</img>'

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example:

'<video id="video1" src="car.avi">
    <transitionfilter id="trans1"
         type="ellipseWipe" subtype="circle" 
         begin="2" dur="12" calcMode="discrete" 
         values="0.083; 0.166; 0.250; 0.333; 0.416; 0.500;
             0.583; 0.666; 0.750; 0.833; 0.916; 1.000;" />
</video>'
typo?
-> the value of the values attribute cannot end with
';'
-> missing strongly recommended alt attribute for video...