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A comment to the paragraph below was recently added via http://zope.org/Documentation/Books/ZopeBook/2_6Edition/IntroducingZope.stx#2-12

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    Many application servers allow you perform some of the below-mentioned
    tasks.

      % Anonymous User - Apr. 17, 2004 1:46 am:
       Should be:

       Many application servers allow you to perform some of the below-mentioned tasks.

      % Anonymous User - June 13, 2004 12:46 am:
       Shouldn't it be "following tasks" and not "below-mentioned tasks"? The former is clearly easier to read and
       comprehend than the latter, which is just an awkward construction.

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