Edit/Approval - Mountain Footsteps

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Andrea,
  
 Congratulations on BP #1 of the day. A few edits in the usual BGT format below. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/kyttd8m http://tinyurl.com/kyttd8m
  
 Cheers, Richard
  
 
  
  
 ### Mountain Footsteps: hikes in the East Kootenay of southeastern British Columbia ###
 EDIT: Add the author's name in the title.
 Edit: I'd add an initial cap to "Hikes" and "Southeastern"
  
 ###Listed Weight; Not Available###
 Edit: No need to include this as books rarely have listed weights.
  
 ### (eg. Cliff Lake was, in fact, a long full day, at least in snowy June),###
 EDIT: Either "e.g." or "e g" [This is an abbreviation for two Latin words (exempli gratia) and the letters should be separated.
  
 
 ###Trail maps (even small ones) ###
 Edit: I wasn't clear if you mean "(even for the small trails)" or "(even if they are small)" Can you clarify?
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