Edit/Approval - Mountain Footsteps
| Newsgroups | gmane.culture.backpacking.backpackgeartest |
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Andrea, Congratulations on BP #1 of the day. A few edits in the usual BGT format below. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/kyttd8m http://tinyurl.com/kyttd8m Cheers, Richard ### Mountain Footsteps: hikes in the East Kootenay of southeastern British Columbia ### EDIT: Add the author's name in the title. Edit: I'd add an initial cap to "Hikes" and "Southeastern" ###Listed Weight; Not Available### Edit: No need to include this as books rarely have listed weights. ### (eg. Cliff Lake was, in fact, a long full day, at least in snowy June),### EDIT: Either "e.g." or "e g" [This is an abbreviation for two Latin words (exempli gratia) and the letters should be separated. ###Trail maps (even small ones) ### Edit: I wasn't clear if you mean "(even for the small trails)" or "(even if they are small)" Can you clarify?