EDIT: OR-BLACK ROCK HAT-STEVE KIDD

 Hi Steven,
  
 Thanks for the review in answer of the call. Looks like a nice hat. I have a few edits for you. Once corrected could you please repost here and put a new version in the Test folder?
  
 Thanks,
  
 Ray
  
  
 ***Black hats are made with a thinner denier material than the other colors
  
 EDIT: a “lower” denier. Denier is “thickness” if you will. The higher the number the thicker it is, the lower the number the thinner the threads are.
  
  
  
 EDIT: your description could use some more information Steve. How is the hat constructed? Is it baffled or sewn-through? How much loft does it have? You say it has a DryLine head band but what is the rest of it made of? How does the fabric feel? Is there elastic in it?
  
  
  
 ***Since the item weighs less than an ounce 
  
 EDIT: please add a conversion number or just say, “Since the item weighs so little”
  
  
  
 ***and easily balls up to tangerine-like size
  
 EDIT: just “tangerine-size” (Drop the like)
  
  
  
 ***The hat does a great job of covering my ears and full skull when it is fully needed.
  
 edit: may read better: The hat does a great job of covering my ears and whole head when it is fully needed.
  
  
  
 ***In fact, I was so impressed with it that when I recently noticed the cottage industry vendor had a one day sale I decided to acquire a second hat.
  
 Edit: do you mean that Black Rock Gear had a sale? Just use their name instead of “cottage industry vendor”