Edit/Approval - PackaFeather XL - Bob Dorenfeld

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Bob
  
 Another Brownie Point for you! Edits below in the standard BGT format. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/m26e6rp
  
 Best for the Holidays,
  
 Richard
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 ### Nov 20, 2014 ###
 EDIT: November [written out]
  
 ### Plus, alcohol has several advantages over white gas and compressed liquid fuels: it's safe around nylon and other plastics, has very low odor, and it's easy to find at a wide variety of stores. ###
 Edit: has a very low odor [or "has very little odor"]
  
 ### The lowest altitude was at 5500 ft (1700 m), and highest was at 11,500 ft
 (3500).  ###
 EDIT: (3500 m)
  
 ### and I almost always come home with one third of it left over.  ###
 Edit: one-third [with a hyphen]
  
 
 ### I find it excellent for 3-season backpacking use; for more demanding tasks, like melting snow, a white gas or other type of pressurized stove would be a better choice.
 EDIT: The last clause is projection but easily fixed: "I think a white gas . . ."
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