Re: Edit/Approval - Red Ledge Thunderlight - Doug White

Thanks for the feedback and instructions. All done. 

     On Sunday, January 25, 2015 8:14 AM, "[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> wrote:
   

     Hi Doug,  I'll be your editor for this. My edits below are in standardBGT format:  EDIT (all caps) – required changeEdit (initial cap) – suggested change or request forclarificationComment – just that, no change required  As I'm not requesting significant re-writes I see no need torepost. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/mzsv5m8  Don't forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.    As this is your second Owner Review, after uploading you will be officiallya Newbie and eligible to apply to test gear. Congratulations! To do this, youneed to (i) complete a tester agreement (you can download one from theBackpackGearTest.org website), and send it to Kathy Waters (address on thewebsite), and (ii) join BGT’s sister Yahoo group, backpackgeartestERS, andwatch for Test Calls.  I know that there willbe some coming shortly, so get your tester agreement off!  A hint – keep posting Owner Reviews. Thatwill earn you credit with the Test Managers.  Cheers, Richard__________________________________________________________________XXX TESTERINFORMATION XXX
Edit: It's not required, but consider adding measurements pertinent to the productunder review – in this case, waist and inseam sizes. ###My trips are normally at least a few miles (3 or more km). ###EDIT: (5 km or more) [3 miles = 5 km; "or more"reads better at the end]  ### PRODUCT INFORMATION ###
EDIT: Add the manufacturer's MSRP ($39.95 US)Edit: Consider adding relevant measurements: inseam, outseam, waist. ###The pants have an elastic waistband with Velcro adjustments on theoutside###EDIT: Here and elsewhere in your Review, substitute "hook-and-loop"for "Velcro." [Velcro is a trademark whose owner jealously guards it.BGT doesn't allow use of "Velcro" unless the manufacturer states on ahangtag or website that it is genuine Velcro. I didn't see it on the Red Ledgewebsite.]  ###The pants have a full length zipper on each side ###Edit: full-length [with a hyphen]  ###These pants have also been used above treeline ataltitudes above 13,000 ft(3962 M).###
Edit: 13,000 ft is approximate, so I'd round of the metric to 4000EDIT: 4000 m [lower case]  ### have found the Large size to work perfect for me. ###
EDIT: work perfectly  ### The bottom zipper pulls do not have lanyards, but could be added if onewanted to. ###
EDIT: but they could be added  ### When I carry Chap Stick, a lighter, a knife, etc, ###
EDIT: carry lip balm, a lighter . . . [Try to avoid using trademarks or brandnames of any product not under review.]  ###Istore them by rolling the pants up to about the size of a water bottleand store them inan outside pocket of my pack. Another downside to these pants, in my opinion,is that there is no fly in front for males. ###Edit: I store the pants by rolling them up [Noun first, thenpronoun]EDIT: Delete "for males" as redundant [There is nofly for females either. And these are listed as men's pants.]  ###Windproof###Edit: windproof [one word]  ###THINGSI LIKE Not breathableNeeds more pockets or different location###
EDIT: THINGS I DON'T LIKEEdit/Comment: How about adding "No fly"   ### My opinion of the pros faroutweigh the cons. ###
Edit: In my opinion the pros far outweigh the cons.
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