Re: Edit/Approval OR-Alite Designs Monarch Chair-Doug White

Thank you for the good feedback. Corrected and uploaded. 

     On Tuesday, February 10, 2015 6:35 PM, "geartest-KbpwapPNqs/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> wrote:
   

     Hi Doug, 
Nice review, and a January Brownie Point for you on this one!  Great detail, and excellent photos to round it out.I have a couple of edits for you, in the usual BGT format:EDIT: must be changedEdit: should be changed but will be left to your discretionComment: just that or something to think about
When you're finished editing, you can upload your OR to:Camp Chairs and Seating > Chairs > Alite Designs Monarch Chair
Regards, ~Bob

###My trips are normally at least a few miles (5 km or more). EDIT:  a few miles (5 km) or more.
###IMAGE 3Showing The Pieces###IMAGE 4Rubber Feet And Shock CordEDIT:  Both of these images are showing in my browsers somewhat too large, but their detail and clarity are good.  Your page will look better if you can shrink both images to about 1/2 of their present size.  Some folks like myself like to enlarge the text for reading, which made these images very large indeed.
###I have used this chair on at least 20 trips. I have used it in temperatures as low as 0 F (-17 C) and I have used it on warmer days up to around 90 F (32 C). I have used this chair in thick forested regions and I have used it at treeline. I have used it on day hikes along with multi-day backpacking trips. I have used the chair on flat ground as well as uneven ground. I have used the chair in shallow and deep snow.EDIT:  This paragraph would read more smoothly if most of the "I have used the chair"s were consolidated into fewer sentences.  Here is just one suggestion, it can be done many ways: "I have used this chair in thick forested regions and at treeline.  I've taken it on day hikes and multi-day backpacking trips.  The chair has also seen use on both flat and uneven ground, and in shallow and deep snow."
###MY EXPERIENCEEDIT:  the large block of text below this heading needs to be broken up into at least a couple of paragraphs, so that it looks more visually appealing and is easier to read on a screen.
###Although I do not use it, the stuff sack that comes with the chair is a nylon stuff sack with an adjustible cinch strap for closing it. EDIT: adjustable
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