EDIT/approval - OR - SLD Streamliner DL Hammock - Kurt Papke
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Hi Kurt, I like your report and the included photos. Nice html. I have provided your edits below. Your edits are in the usual format of... EDIT – must change edit – my recommended change if you agree comment – is just that EDIT – On my screen, I have to scroll left to right in order for me to see your entire report, although admittedly, not very much. I should not have to do this. Please check your html and reduce your report’s width so scrolling isn’t necessary. I believe it might be your “chart” (brief listing of backpacking trips and usage of the hammock) that could be a little too wide. “Measured weight: 16.4 oz (466 g)…” EDIT – Remove the extra space before 16.4 / I’ve noticed that there are times when you only use one space (example under “Weight Listed: 14.5-15.5 oz…) above and others where you use two spaces. Please double check your report and be consistent throughout. “11 ft (3.35 m) length, this is a foot (0.3m) longer than my longest prior hammock.” EDIT – Please add a space (0.3_m) “My first two units have integrated bugnets, which…” EDIT – bug nets [two words] “I like being able to get in and out without unzipping a bugnet.” EDIT – bug net [again – two words] Comment – for our international readers – somewhere near the beginning, you should state that all of your trips occurred within the USA since you have not actually listed USA anywhere within your trip locations. So that was al I found. Thank you for submitting another OR. You will find your folder here - Reviews > Shelters > Hammocks > SLD Streamliner DL Take care and have a great day. Mike