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Hi Troy,
Thanks for your OR! Always nice to see gear work well for a BGTer.
I have a couple of edits for you, in the usual BGT format:
EDIT: must be changed
Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion
Comment: just that or something to think about
When you've made your changes, please repost to this group, using the subject line
REPOST OR Petzl Tikka LED Headlamp -Troy Pelzel
Thanks, and we'll hear from you soon,
~Bob
###I got into backpacking about seven years ago when a friend took me to the Boston Mountains which is part of the Ozarks in Arkansas.
Edit: comma after "Mountains" lets the sentence scan better
###I usually carry my backpack with a tent, camp pad, freeze dried meals and I always carry a water purifier for clean water.
EDIT: to preserve list integrity (also note compound noun), modify to "...pad, and freeze-dried meals, and I always..."
###Other details:3 AAA batteries
EDIT: space after the colon
###We got there late at night so right out of the truck I had my lifesaving, hands free headlamp strapped on.
EDIT: hands-free
###We camped at about 1800 ft (549 m) in elevation.
Edit: "in" not necessary here
###The temperature was mild about 65 F (36 C) the first night but it rained about 4 in (10 cm).
EDIT: dependent phrase needs comma: "mild, about 65 F (36 C) the first"
###The Petzl Tikka headlamp is a must have for my backpack.
EDIT: must-have
###Weather resistant and super bright. From camping to night hiking to grilling in the back yard.
EDIT: Unless you reformat into a bulleted list, these need to be complete sentences. e.g. "It's weather resistant and super bright, and useful for camping, night hiking, and grilling in the back yard."
###Going into the third year of use I love the fact that I don't have to worry about purchasing a go to light source.
EDIT: go-to
###THINGS I LIKE
Edit: think about making a bullet list of all the things you like - there were several others cited in your text above (e.g. battery life, water resistance, brightness, etc.). Readers really like to see a summary list like that.