EDIT - OR-Petzl Tikka LED Headlamp-Troy S. Pelzel

"geartest-KbpwapPNqs/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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Hi Troy, 
 

 Looking good!  Almost there, just one edit that was missed: please see below and make that change to prevent a series of sentence fragments.  
 

 EDIT: must be changed
 Edit: should be changed but will be left to your discretion
 Comment: just that or something to think about
 

 I'd like to see that update first, then you'll be ready to publish:
 REPOST OR Petzl Tikka LED Headlamp -Troy Pelzel
 

 Thanks,
 ~Bob
 

 

 

 ###Weather resistant and super bright. From camping to night hiking to grilling in the back yard. 
 EDIT:  Unless you reformat into a bulleted list, these need to be complete sentences.  e.g. "It's weather resistant and super bright, and useful for camping, night hiking, and grilling in the back yard."
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