RE: Edit/Approval - CamelBak Spire 22 - Kathy Waters

"'Kathy Waters' kathy-UFS7mITjnAiGkU+Z+ufpa1aTQe2KTcn/@public.gmane.org [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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Thanks, Richard

 

Last one for the day, I suspect.  Kids get home in 2 hours and I have “real” work to get done.  I did leave “alleluia” as a personal preference though.  All else corrected, file deleted and upload in the proper folder.

 

Kathy

 

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Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - CamelBak Spire 22 - Kathy Waters

 

  

Kathy,

 

Again the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. Don't forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy after you revise and upload to http://tinyurl.com/orqrmck

 

Cheers, Richard

________________

 

 ### I spent most of my time in the south central region of Colorado that I can home. ###
EDIT: Ah the perils of cutting and pasting. "that I call home,"

 

### As I write this, it's early May 2015 ###
Edit: Not really. May 26 isn't early May.

 

### Even with summer time gear, it would not be large enough for my usage backpacking. ###

EDIT: for my using it while backpacking

 

### but it keeps water leakage, it I didn't tighten things up properly, away from the main compartment much better. ###
EDIT: if I didn't

 

### The hydration tube, threads into the main compartment ###
Edit: Delete the comma.

 

### Also, because the Spire is women-specific, the sternum strap is comfortably place to accommodate my bustling ###
EDIT: comfortably placed

EDIT: my bust line

 

### but not too large waistbelt and - glory alleluia - adjustment straps ###
Edit: glory Hallelujah

 

### even if the pack were mediocre in all other aspects it would still be a stand-out daypack. ###
Edit: standout [one word, no hyphen]
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