Edit/Approval OR-ZPACKS ARC BLAST-STEVE KIDD

Hi Steve, 
 

 Fun review, and you make it obvious why this pack works for you.  I've heard of cuben fabric but haven't yet tried it myself.
 And a BP for you on this one, we don't have any ZPacks backpacks yet.
 Couple of edits for you on grammar and for clarity, then upload to 
 Packs > Internal and External Framed Backpacks > ZPacks Arc Blast Backpack
 

 Don't forget to delete your draft folder.
 

 ~Bob
 

 

 

 ###It is offered in three sizes and the pack I own is the default offering.
 EDIT:  I see that this is what ZPacks calls their middle capacity, but it would be clearer to readers if you also specified the available sizes/capacities, making it clear that size refers to total volume (as opposed to waist belt, shoulder harness, etc)
 

 ###They also now seal the packs seams.  
 EDIT:  pack's (or just pack)
  
 ###Winds like these can easily effect hammock campers as there is 360 degree air circulation.
 EDIT:  affect
 

 ###This caused three of the crew to call an audible and remain at the shelter for the final leg of the trip.
 EDIT:  this is sports slang (I had to look it up), best to replace with a more common word or phrase (e.g. time-out)
 

 ###As the pack is on large compartment I decided it would make sense for me to add several accessories.  
 EDIT:  is one large
 

 ###When I am closing the pack I do try to exert the majority of the air from the interior before sealing the hook and loop.  
 EDIT:  expel the majority of air