Edit - Camelbak Trizip - Eric Stroup

Eric, I’ll be your editor on this one.  The photos are much appreciated and really add to your Review. 
  
 My edits below are in standard BGT format:
  
 EDIT (all caps) – required change
 Edit (initial cap) – suggested change or request for clarification
 Comment – just that, no change required
  
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 Cheers, Richard Lyon
 BGT Editor
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 ### Backpacking Background: ###
 EDIT: Could you add a sentence or two about your typical trip (length, location, etc) and style (Do you use a tent or hammock; what kind of food do you pack, etc). You've only used 77 words (limit is 100) and you need to give your readers a bit more information. 
  
 ### spent a lot of time with a ruck sack and on my feet. ###
 Edit: rucksack [one word]
  
 ### Manufacturer: Camelbak ### 
 EDIT: Camelbak Products, LLC [Here – and only here – you need the manufacturer's full legal name. You can usually find this on the manufacturer's copyright notice on its home page or on the "About Us" or "Contact Us" page.
  
 ### Manufacturer's Website: Camelbak ###
 EDIT: Camelbak.com [The text should be the full web address of the home page.]
  
 ### FIELD USE ###
 EDIT: Add some text about the conditions in which you used the bag – temperatures, weather, locations, and so forth. Ranges or approximations are OK.
  
 ### I've carried this bag almost daily as a get a get home bag or bug out bag and regular book bag for almost a year now. ###
 EDIT: Delete the extra "a get"
 EDIT: get-home [with a hyphen]
  
 ###Fully loaded out I'm carrying just under 45 lbs. ###
 EDIT: 45 lb [BGT abbreviations are always singular.]
 EDIT: 45 lb (20 kg) [Metric conversion required.]
  
 ### I stretch the adjustability of the harness to it's max. ###
 EDIT: its max [no apostrophe]
  
 ### A top pocket on the lid and a velcro area on the front for any patches I want to put on. I also added some more velcro areas on the top of the lid. ###
 EDIT: The owner of the trademark Velcro® jealously guards its rights. Unless Camelbak says somewhere that it uses Velcro, substitute "hook and loop." If it does, then Velcro, with a capital V – exactly as the trademark owner uses it.
  
 ### The layout of the pockets and the zippers do interrupt the flow of the webbing and really limits the size of the pouches and accessories that you can add.###
 EDIT: First a question – do you mean "The layout of the pockets and the layout of the zippers" [layout of each], or "The zippers and the layout of the pockets" [one layout]? If the former, change "do interrupt" to "does interrupt;" if the latter, change "really limits" to "really limit." Need to agree your verbs as well as clarify.
  
 
 ### The seperate pocket for the Antidote bladder ###
 EDIT: separate [spelling]