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Eric,
Many thanks for the quick turnaround. A few edits below, in the same EDIT/Edit/Comment format. Repost again, as before and be sure to post a tinyurl or similar URL so I can check the html version. Before doing so, to save time, repost in plain text a revised Backpacking Background section – see first EDIT below. I'll review that and then we'll proceed to a final review of the full OR.
Good question. You needn't include a summary if your likes and dislikes are complete, as yours are. Sometimes a summary can add to the Review, sometimes it's unnecessary. Depends upon the content of the Review and the writer's style.
Cheers, Richard
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Backpacking Background: ###
EDIT: Still need some information about your backpacking style. Take a look at Owner Reviews from Ray Estella and Bob Dorenfeld for what should be included. Use your own style, but tell your readers about your typical trip. Some of the things that you might include are type of shelter, average trail day, normal location, size of your group, constant companions.
### I've carried this bag almost daily and on several day hikes and really enjoyed it. ###
EDIT: Where did you carry it? Please explain.
EDIT: high 30s to the 70s F (4-25 C) [Delete extra "the;" add conversion.]
### A Government Issue Individual First Aid Kit (IFAK), an Meal Ready to Eat (MRE), ###
EDIT: and Meal Ready to Eat
Comment: Allow me a bit of nostalgia. When I was doing my basic Army training, in the middle of the last century, our group beta-tested MREs, then called LRRP rations (long range recon patrol). Tasted like sawdust unless you added hot water, in which case they tasted like hot, wet sawdust. Ah the memories!
### It's considered a three day pack and has just over 3 Liters of capacity ###
Edit: three-day [with a hyphen]
Edit: "liters" need not be capitalized. Here and elsewhere.
### It comes with the Futura Harness ###
Edit: The pack comes [Careful on using pronouns to begin a paragraph.]
###Since I'm 6 feet 1 inch tall, I stretch the adjustability of the harness to it's max. ###
EDIT: Add the metric equivalent for your height.
EDIT: its [No apostrophe.]