Re: Edit/Approval - Colorado 14er Disasters - Bob Dorenfeld
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Hi Richard, Good suggestion to add author info - done. Updated publisher - Johnson Books is an imprint of Big Earth. Grammer updated too. Thanks, Bob ---In [email protected], <montana.angler@...> wrote : Bob, Another Brownie Point for you. Just a few edits, in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/pvyknyp Cheers, Richard ________________________________ General Edit/Comment: Consider adding a sentence or two about the author – climbing background, other books, etc. Certainly I'd be interested and I expect others would too. ###Colorado 14er Disasters Mark Scott-Nash### EDIT: by Mark Scott-Nash [Otherwise the author's name might be read as part of the title. You might put all that on one line.] ### Publisher: Johnson Books ### EDIT/Edit: The copyright notice says Big Earth Publishing. ### There's much valuable insight and many lessons to be learned from mountaineering accidents, as Scott-Nash makes abundantly clear throughout these dramatically retold stories of climber's accidents.### EDIT: There are much more [Plural subject – insight and lessons] EDIT: climbers' accidents [plural possessive] ### they ended up proceeded along a different route ### EDIT: proceeding