Edit/Approval - GSI Compact Scraper - Kathryn Montovan

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Hi Katie,
  
 Good choice for an OR. I tested a cook set from GSI that included this scraper and I too think it's great. 
  
 Here are your edits in the standard BGT format:
  
 EDIT – Must be changed
 Edit – Consider a change or clarification
 Comment – Just that, no change necessary.
  
 After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/pzrspnv Don't forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### and often wet, mountainous terrain of eastern New York, and western Vermont. ###
 Edit: Delete the comma after "New York"
  
 ### One side (orange) is hard plastic and the other is a soft rubber blade. ###
 EDIT: One edge (orange)
  
 ### The hard plastic blade isdesigned to scrape stuck or burnt-on food residue off of pots, while the softs rubber blade wipes away stickier, wetter foods. ###
 Edit: off pots [delete "of"]
 EDIT: soft rubber blade [spelling]
  
 ### On my first trip with is, this scraper did a beautiful job ###
 removing cooked on lentils and rice. ###
 EDIT: with it 
 Edit: cooked-on [with a hyphen. Not only technically correct but for consistency as you use hyphenated words frequently.]
  
 ### This is what I would have done if I had been using my spoon, but for some reason my group found it to be less acceptable to clean the scraper by this method.###
 Comment: Can't imagine why.
  
 ### Over the past few years I have discovered that it will melt on the edge if used in a hot pan. It also has gotten a few nicks along the edge from tackling burnt on food, ###
 
 Edit: the scraper will melt [First use in a new paragraph usually works better with the antecedent rather than the pronoun.]
 Edit: burnt-on [Again for consistency. You use burnt-on with a hyphen in at least one other place.
  
 
 ### It has quickly become something that I would not want to forget at home, ###
 Edit: "leave at home" would be more accurate
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