Edit - Cold Steel Knife - Doug White

Hi Doug,
  
 Thanks for keeping the ORs coming.  My edits below are in standard BGT format:
  
 EDIT (all caps) – required change
 Edit (initial cap) – suggested change or request for clarification
 Comment – just that, no change required
  
 After revising you need to post the html version of the Report in the Tests/Owner Reviews folder on BackpackGearTest.org, and post the plain text version here, with "Repost," the product name, and your name in the subject line, and with a tinyurl link to the html version in the body of your message.
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### COLD STEEL TRAIL MASTER O-1 HIGH CARBON STEEL [Title] ###
 EDIT: You need to add "KNIFE" at the end. You may need to put the title on two lines to do so. If this is a Report Writer proplem, let me know.
  
 ### PRODUCT INFORMATION ##
 EDIT: Add listed dimensions/weight and MSRP
  
 Manufacturer: Cold Steel ###
 EDIT: Cold Steel, Inc. [Need the manufacturer's full name here.]
  
 ### and the end of the handle has a one piece grommet ###
 Edit: one-piece [with a hyphen]
  
 ### The knife also comes with a Secure-Ex sheath ###
 Edit: Delete "also"
  
 ### Around the sheath perimeter are twenty rivets or grooves that can be used as lashing points.The sheath has nylon straps ###
 EDIT: Add a space at the end of the first sentence.
  
 ### FIELD USE ###
 EDIT: Add a sentence or two about where you used it, e g Colorado, Appalachian Trail. A few examples will do.
  
 ### I have used it in thick forested regions near treeline. ###
 Edit: thick-forested [with a hyphen. Or "thickly forested," two words]
  
 ### but primarily use it at camp for batoning wood ###
 EDIT/Edit: "Baton" isn't in the dictionary as a verb. I think I know what you mean, though – " splitting the wood down to the dryer inner parts is something I've found that works very well for getting a fire going in moist environments." Whatever you intend it to mean, say so here, the first place you use the word.
  
 ### The knife's weight being heavier is a big plus ###
 Edit: The knife's weight's being heavier [possessive in front of a gerund]
  
 ### I have never gotten any blisters with this knife after hours of use. ###
 Edit: Consider adding "even" before "after."
  
 
 ### The grip of the handle is great too in my opinion. Even in rain or snow, it has never slipping out of my hand. ###
 EDIT: slipped out