Edit/Approval - Cold Steel Trail Master - Doug White
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Doug – Well done; you've earned your Brownie Point. One EDIT [must be changed] and one Edit [suggested change] below. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/ol5m4pc Don't forget to delete your Tests / OR folder copy. Cheers, Richard __________________________ ### Manufacturer: Cold Steel ### EDIT: Cold Steel, Inc. [Here – but only here – BGT requires the manufacturer's full legal name. You can often find it in the copyright notice on the manufacturer's website.] ### I usually carry it on my side so it's easy to get to for chopping ### Edit: Pronouns in the first sentence of a new paragraph can be confusing. How about "I usually carry the knife . . . "