Edit/Approval - DIY Sled - Joe Schaffer

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 18 Mar 2016 06:42:07 -0700
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Joe – 
  
 Thanks for a unique and very informative Owner Review. Well worth a Brownie Point! A few edits below in the standard format. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/zdz5hcq http://tinyurl.com/zdz5hcq
  
 When you post your next OR, please include a tinyurl link to the Tests/OR folder copy in your post to the list. Makes the editor's job easier.
  
 Cheers, Richard
 
    
 ### Cost: 
    Unknown--stuff I had laying around. ###
 EDIT: lying around
  
 ### This sled is a single piece of sheet steel. The sides are bent up 1 1/2  in (4 cm) at 90 degree angle. This gives a bit of structure and also purchase to 6 lash points made of 2 chain links inserted at the tail, middle and start of the nose curl.###
 Edit: A style suggestion, and entirely up to you. When using single-digit numbers in text rather than a measurement, it's easier to read when spelled out – above, six lash points made of two linked chains. It's particularly to read in a paragraph with many measurements.
  
 ### A metal break and arc welder would be nice. ###
 EDIT: would have been nice
  
 
 ### Flip the sheet over and use the Vice-grips ###
 Edit/EDIT: Everywhere else it's "Vice-Grips." If that's a brand use whatever its manufacturer does. Whichever, be consistent.