Edit/Approval - OOFOS sandals - Kathy Waters

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 27 Apr 2016 07:29:20 -0700
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Kathy,
  
 Edits below, in the usual EDIT/Edit/Comment format. Upload to http://tinyurl.com/zqk3wpy after revising.
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### Measured Weight: 8 oz (227 g) ###
 EDIT: Please indicate whether this is per sandal or per pair.
  
 ### I spent the next two weeks in New Jersey, pining for the outdoors and some sunshine while central Jersey experienced three storms, each dumping two-digit inches/centimeters' worth of the white stuff. Obviously, my
 sandals weren't very useful there. I had to borrow my sister's tennis shoes though as I slogged through the slush on daily walks in my sister's neighborhood - it was the best I could do. There the temperatures were
 frigid; 10 to 30 F (-12 to -1C). ###
 Edit/Comment: I don't see what this paragraph adds to the Review. I'd delete it.
  
 ### My foot is in firm allover contact with the footbed throughout the arch which I really like. ###
 EDIT: all-over contact
  
 ### After a day of the ups-and-downs of mountain trails, even wearing the best of my boots, my legs can be tired and sore, but are gradually soothe by the stretching motion and the relaxing of those hard-worked muscles by the OOlalas. ###
 EDIT: soothed
  
 ### Finally, I got brave enough and the OOFOS took a spin in my electric washer on a regular cycle ###
 Edit/Comment: There's little difference between electric and gas washers, but a significant difference between top-loaders and front-loaders, the latter being much gentler on the washer's contents. Consider changing "electric" to "top-loading" or "front-loading," as the case may be.