Edit/Approval - Icebreaker Hipline - Andrea Murland

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 07 Aug 2016 05:50:38 -0700
Newsgroups gmane.culture.backpacking.backpackgeartest
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Andrea,
  
 Excellent OR. Your edits are below, mostly suggestions for you to consider. Upload to http://tinyurl.com/hpg9mag after revising and be sure to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
  
 Cheers, Richard
 
  
 General Edit: Might be worth mentioning that Icebreaker is discontinuing these but that they are available from third party retailers.
  
 ### I began hiking frequently in 2006 and have since hiked in Western Canada, Australia, and spent 2 months backpacking in the Alps. ###
 Edit: two months [When using single-digit numbers in text, it's easier to follow if written out. A style matter for you to decide.]
  
 ### The size medium fits me perfectly, with no sliding around, ###
 Edit: Consider adding a relevant measurement, here waist size.  I do this in my hiking bio. Up to you.
  
 ### The oldest pairs of my hipkinis are starting to be noticeably thinner ###
 EDIT: Hipkinis [With an initial cap. A brand name.]
  
 
 ### I have always washed them with my regular laundry ###
 Edit: How – what sort of detergent, with or without bleach or fabric softener?