Edit/Approval - Icebreaker Hipline - Andrea Murland
| Newsgroups | gmane.culture.backpacking.backpackgeartest |
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Andrea, Excellent OR. Your edits are below, mostly suggestions for you to consider. Upload to http://tinyurl.com/hpg9mag after revising and be sure to delete your Tests/OR folder copy. Cheers, Richard General Edit: Might be worth mentioning that Icebreaker is discontinuing these but that they are available from third party retailers. ### I began hiking frequently in 2006 and have since hiked in Western Canada, Australia, and spent 2 months backpacking in the Alps. ### Edit: two months [When using single-digit numbers in text, it's easier to follow if written out. A style matter for you to decide.] ### The size medium fits me perfectly, with no sliding around, ### Edit: Consider adding a relevant measurement, here waist size. I do this in my hiking bio. Up to you. ### The oldest pairs of my hipkinis are starting to be noticeably thinner ### EDIT: Hipkinis [With an initial cap. A brand name.] ### I have always washed them with my regular laundry ### Edit: How – what sort of detergent, with or without bleach or fabric softener?