EDIT/Approval - OR - GooseFeet Down Socks + Over-Booties - Lyon

Hi Richard, 
 You know the drill, EDIT – must be changed, edit – my recommended change if you agree and comment is just that.
  
  
 “Summer adventures are often on centered on fly fishing opportunities; winter on ski or ski touring.”
 EDIT – I’d remove the “on” before “centered” as well as the “on” after “winter”. 
  
 “Stitching indicates that each Sock consist sof three pieces:”
 EDIT – consists of
  
 “Each of these involved a hike on snowshoes or hiking crampons, or a ski on telemark skis with skins, of 1-10 miles (1.5 to 16 km)…”
 Edit – I’d recommend standardizing the use of either the hyphen or the word “to”. Either [1 - 10 miles (1.5 - 16 km)] or [1 to 10 miles (1.5 to 16 km)] This issue is repeated in multiple places within the report.
 
 
 “The photo at left gives some idea of the temperature…”
 Edit – I struggled with this one and it came down to the difficulty in getting an idea of a temperature based upon this photo. I’ve experienced temperature swings anywhere from 20 F to maybe 75 F with conditions appearing very similar to what is shown in this photograph. I’d recommend rewording this and maybe dropping “temperature” for something else.
  
 “CARE”
 Comment – I’d like to know if there were any “care” or washing instructions that came with the product and if so, did you follow them and what were your results if you did and they were separate from your reported results listed here already
  
 So, that was what I found. Go ahead and upload whenever you’re ready. Having said that, I’m admittedly perplexed as to what folder to place this into. Clothing (socks) or Footwear (Camp Shoes) or another?
 Take care, 
 Mike