Edit/Approval - REI Sahara Hat - Jamie D

Jamie,
  
 Excellent OR, quite thorough yet still interesting. Well worth a Brownie point. Edits below in the usual EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/hsgukm6  Don't forget to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
  
 Cheers, Richard
  
 
  
 ###Updated August 29th, 2016###
 Edit/Comment: Why "updated?" Did you submit an earlier version that's been deleted?
  
 ### Weight: 175 lb (7 kg) ###
 EDIT: (79 kg)
  
 ### Head Circumference: 22 in (56 cm) ###
 Edit: Consider adding US hat size.
  
 ### Manufacturer : REI www.rei.com http://www.rei.com
 EDIT: Here we require the manufacturer's full legal name – here, Recreational Equipment, Inc. You might add "(REI") or "Better known as REI" or similar explanation. Also, add the comma after "Equipment" in the title.
 EDIT: Your link didn't work for me.
  
 ### The REI Sahara Hat is a wide brimmed sun hat designed for women. ### 
 Edit: wide-brimmed [with a hyphen]
  
 ### The crown is made of flexible, easily compacted Nylon that carries a UPF 50+ rating.  ###
 Edit: Nylon is now generic – no need to capitalize. Here and a couple of other places
 Edit: For our foreign readers you might add a brief commentary on what SPF means.
  
 ### Around the inside of the crown is the moisture wicking headband, ###
 Edit: moisture-wicking [with a hyphen]
  
 ### I'm guessing I've worn this hat at least a hundred times in the 2 years I've owned it.  ###
 Edit: two years [Much easier to read when non-measurement numbers are written out]
  
 ### I tend to rinse it, squeeze the water out, rinse it once more, then hag to dry.  ###
 EDIT: hang to dry
  
 ### The floatation aspect I've tested several times in various pools, water parks, and lakes, usually by accident (I'm not always good at remembering to cinch up the chin strap, don't judge!). ###
 Edit: Add a period after "accident." 
  
 ### Nothing is mentioned about this space on the REI webpage so I can only assume it's purpose.  ###
 EDIT: its purpose [no apostrophe]
  
 ### Other than the obvious use of keeping the hat securely on my noggin' in windy conditions,###
 EDIT: Delete the apostrophe after "noggin." I don't think it's a contraction, just slang.