Edit/Approval - Feathered Friends Down Booties
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Hi Andrea and thanks for breaking the drought on ORs. A gentle reminder for me to finish up a few. Edits below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/ztmwpr2 Cheers, Richard _________________________ ### Feathered Friends Down Booties Owner Review – October 16, 2016 ### EDIT: Put your name in the title – Owner Review by Andrea Murland. ### The first is that the outer sole of the booties is quite slippery. ### Edit: Match the number of soles and booties – "the outer sole of each bootie is" or "the outer soles of the booties are." ###The outer layer of the booties seem to be pretty water resistant. ### EDIT: seems to be ["layer" is singular] ###Durability: ### Edit: Consider adding a sentence or two about care (or lack of care). Washing, drying, air-drying the sole, and the like. ### My favourite feature is that the down socks are separate from the outer shell, so I can use the socks as a sleeping layer as well. ### Comment: Interesting. See my comment in my recent Down Booties OR, in which I wished the two were integrated.