Edit/Approval - Feathered Friends Down Booties

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 20 Oct 2016 18:24:08 -0700
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Hi Andrea and thanks for breaking the drought on ORs. A gentle reminder for me to finish up a few. Edits below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/ztmwpr2
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### Feathered Friends Down Booties
 Owner Review – October 16, 2016 ###
 EDIT: Put your name in the title – Owner Review by Andrea Murland.
  
 ### The first is that the outer sole of the booties is quite slippery. ###
 Edit: Match the number of soles and booties – "the outer sole of each bootie is"  or "the outer soles of the booties are."
  
 ###The outer layer of the booties seem to be pretty water resistant. ### 
 EDIT: seems to be ["layer" is singular]
  
 ###Durability: ###
 Edit: Consider adding a sentence or two about care (or lack of care). Washing, drying, air-drying the sole, and the like.
  
 ### My favourite feature is that the down socks are separate from the outer shell, so I can use the socks as a sleeping layer as well. ###
 
 Comment: Interesting. See my comment in my recent Down Booties OR, in which I wished the two were integrated.