Edit/Approval - Olicamp Xcelerator - Dan Hotchkiss

Dan,
  
 Thanks for the quick turnaround, and for revising as I requested. I have a few minor edits below, in the same Edit/EDIT [suggested/mandatory change] below, but nothing requiring another repost. After making the changes, you may upload to http://tinyurl.com/gohxqsc http://tinyurl.com/gohxqsc Be sure to delete your Tests/OR folder copy.
  
 I didn't mention it before, but your photos are commendable – clear and informative. Excellent for any OR, especially so for your first one.
  
 Congratulations on completing your first Owner Review!
  
 Cheers, Richard
 
  
 ### The pot has stamped-in graduations running down the side of the pot showing 8, 16, 24 & 32 oz; but no metric markings. ###
 Edit: the inside of the pot [clarification; up to you]
  
 ### with humidity levels from approx 50% RH up to 100% RH. ###
 EDIT: approximately
  
 ### Although many people would question the idea of owning a remote canister stove that does not have a preheat loop, ###
 EDIT: might question [This is a nitpick, but use of "would" could be said to speak for others, making it projection, which BGT doesn't allow.]
  
 
 ### about half an ounce (14 g) less fuel in the case of bringing 16 oz (0.47 liter) of tap water to boil. ###
 Edit: No reason you should know this, but capacity of water bottles and pots may be expressed only in metric e g, a one-liter bottle. I'd say "bringing half a liter of tap water." Again, up to you.