EDIT/APPROVAL - Golightly Cashmere Watchcap - Richard Lyon

Richard,

 

This one clears up your very nice contributions to the OR list.  Just a few
edits and comments and you are good to upload to the newly created folder
at:
http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Clothing/Hats/Golightly%20Cashmere%2
0The%20Cashmere%20Watchcap/.  Please remember to delete the test file.

 

Thanks again!

Kathy

 

 

COMMENT:  You might want to put a line break in your title so "Golightly
Cashmere" is on one line and then "The Cashmere Watchcap" is on another so
it doesn't look like "cashmere" was inadvertently repeated.  Your call
though. 

 

Hat size: US 7 5/8 (certfiably a fathead)



EDIT:  "Certifiably" and no comment.

 

MSRP: $155 US

COMMENT:  Gasp!  Yikes!

 

If you've read my earlier Owner Review of the Featherweight Watchcap you'll
have heard my lavish praise for use of cashmere in the backcountry. 

EDIT/edit/COMMENT - If you could kindly re-word this sentence to eliminate
the dreaded second-person pronouns, I would be delighted.  Thank you.  Can't
have the newbies picking up bad habits.

 

That included some references to my other Watchcap, which is now at least
thiry years old and in great shape.

EDIT:  "thirty"

 

As well as wearing the cap during hiking or ski trekking, as a quilt user in
all but the coldest conditions,I often use it to top off my sleep system,
worn over a merino hoodie. 

EDIT:  Need a space after the comma after "conditions".

 

The cap is all cashmere, without any added lycra or similar fabric for
stretchiness, so the cap does move around a bit with head movement or
contact with a branch or my pack.

EDIT:  Capitalize "LYCRA" if you want to use the proper name.

 

 

 

Kathy 

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