Re: Edit/Approval - Packs Dry Bag - Nancy Griffith

Thanks, Richard, especially for noticing that I forgot to add the best part!  I've made the changes, deleted the test file and uploaded.  Let me know if you see anything wonky on the 'waterproof' paragraph that I added.
Have a wonderful holiday season!  We are planning to use the time off to get some testing in (desert, ocean and snow).  BGT is such a great excuse to HAVE to get outside.
Best,
Nancy

      From: "[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]>
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 Sent: Friday, December 9, 2016 9:06 PM
 Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit/Approval - Packs Dry Bag - Nancy Griffith
   
    Nancy,  Great to see a Zpacksproduct reviewed. I have a day pack from them and love it.
 A few nitpicksbelow, but one addition I'd like to see. Your first "like" is"waterproof" but there's no commentary on exposure to water or theelements, or how no moisture has gotten in. Please add a few sentences aboutthis.  After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/jdvk9pz  Best wishes for Christmasand the New Year.  Richard______________________________-### The top has a roll-top design with a full stripof hook-and-loop that holds the top closed.  ###
Edit: It also has a clip that you refer to later. Consider adding to thedescription. I'd call it a typical dry bag closure.  ### Since the fabric iswater and air-tight,###Edit: airtight [one word,no hyphen]  ### Zpacks offers a one year warranty againstdefects in materials or workmanship. ###Edit: one-year [with ahyphen]  ### I bought two Zpacksmedium dry bags after a rainy backpacking trip just over a year ago where our old dry sackfailed ###
EDIT: when our old dry sack failed
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